Wednesday, October 13, 2010

drip

it covers the doorways it covers your hands
you think its great but you dont understand
you never did and you never will
but you wait around till youve had your fill.
things get darker, its all a haze
and you scream and you scream, trapped in this maze
the hours pass by but oh, still;
youre trapped and were hungry, we want our fill.

5 comments:

Margaret said...

i love this
and ooooh good luck tomorrow lovely girl!! you'll blitz it :)
and for english (vomiiit) - working my way through that right now. yuck.
:D YESS to post HSC blog party time! xxxx

that girl lucy said...

your writing is pretty amazing.

Dean said...
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Dean said...

This I Love!!! Hope to hear from you.

Cheryl: Oh to Be a Muse said...

what great writing. it sounds like song lyrics.

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